Ruby's Fan-Fic entry

Moon snarled as the rouge came closer. the rouge snapped at her neck. Ollie then came and stopped him and looked at me, or maybe it was my body. Lin was kitting as i looked around. Two dead kits lay on the ground.
"Now my kits!" She cried
I froze. What did she mean? I was still here!
"Whats wrong?" I asked
Lin wailed as loud as she could.
I looked at the snowy kit that lay dead and touched her. She was cold. But suddenly i was enveloped in a dark, unknown place!

After a moon passed, Moon opened her eyes. Where am i? She thought. She soon realized that she was in Lin's den!
"Ollie! Come look at Clare! She opened her eyes!" Lin cried out in joy
"Whats wrong? Ive had my eyes open for way longer then Lin! I opened the three days before!" Moon hissed
Ollie licked her head
"You learn quickly Clare." Ollie replied
"Stop!" Moon hissed
Moon didnt care what Ollie said next but she went to sleep.

The next morning Moon went outside to hunt. She was almost away when Lin pulled on her tail.
"Where are you going?" She asked
"To Hunt." Moon replied
"I dont think so Clare."
"My name isnt Clare!" Moon snarled
"Whats wrong Clare?"
"My name isnt Clare! Im not a kit!"
"But you are my dear!"
Moon ran away with her tail high in the air. She walked back to the entrance of the den and drew in the dirt.
And she wrote this:


I Am Moon

Ollie looked at it in shock.
"What does that say?" He asked
"It says who i am! I am NOT Clare!" Moon hissed
Lin who ran after Moon was finally here
"Clare why did you r-" Lin stopped in her sentence "M-moon?"
"Yes I am NOT Clare!" Moon continued to draw in the Dirt and as if it was destiny, ended up making this:


Moon is alive



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This is a story about a cat's spirit coming back, as in reincarnation. I thought i would put a twist to it by making Moon remember who she was. I know this isnt that long but i didnt have that much time to work on it.

ohhhhh nice!

*facepalm* i just realized how gross it sounds when you think about writing in dirt! *cough Cough* Dirt! *cough cough* So by Dirt i meant soil.

Great story!

Haha I know what you mean Ruby XD

IceClaw the Scratcher wrote:

Haha I know what you mean Ruby XD

lol yea u get it XD

Nice story! Reincarnations... Cool!

That's a really unique idea! Nice story!

Flameleaf of FireClan wrote:

That's a really unique idea! Nice story!

Thanks Flameleaf

Awesome! I really loved the theme of this! To me, the theme is that you are who you are, not someone else! I know its reincarnation but it works that way as well! Love it and it seemed really well thought out! ^-^ GREAT JOB!

Fireheart wrote:

Awesome! I really loved the theme of this! To me, the theme is that you are who you are, not someone else! I know its reincarnation but it works that way as well! Love it and it seemed really well thought out! ^-^ GREAT JOB!

Thanks Fire

Hey Ruby, in the story Moon got reincarnated as the dead snowy kit? Cuz thats what I thought...