Goldenfur's Warrior Feast Fan-fic Entry

Rebecca was a twenty year old girl with brown eyes and long brown hair. She was also tall and slim. She lived with her parents and an older brother. Rebecca was a smart girl studying in university who tops her level every year. Her parents were very proud of her.
One day, Rebecca’s father wanted her to follow him to the garage to fix his car as the car needed servicing. According to her father his friend is called Steve, who is the owner of the garage. Rebecca groaned. She did not want to go on some silly errand. However, her father was insistent. Rebecca just had to follow.
After driving for a while, they arrived at the garage. The sign says “Happy Garage”. Her father went in and talked to Steve. Steve smiled at Rebecca. She returned it back. Rebecca walked around the garage when she spotted a brown box hidden from sight.
Rebecca was curious. She went near the box and opened it. She gasped. Inside the box were bracelets, necklaces and tens of thousands of dollars. She was astonished. She could not believe what good luck she had. All these things could let her enjoy herself. Her parents were strict with her expenses so she could not buy things that she liked. Greed overcame her. She wanted those valuables. Rebecca decided that she could use the money to buy herself branded clothes, treat herself to a decent meal, wear the stolen jewelry and show off to her classmates in university.
Rebecca let out a cry of triumph. She decided to steal some of the valuables. Rebecca carried the box and hid behind a car which blocked her view from her father and Steve. She took some jewelry and a few thousand dollars from the box. Rebecca debated where to hide her findings. Not in her hand of course, everything would drop to the ground. In the end she decided to hide her findings in her jeans’ pockets. Rebecca stuffed the notes inside her wallet.
After fixing the car, Rebecca and her father drove home. During dinner time, Rebecca excused herself from dinner. She went to her bedroom and closed the door. Rebecca took out the stolen valuables and placed them inside a box and pushed it underneath her bed.
One night, when Rebecca was sleeping, she had a nightmare. A mysterious person visited her and warned her that stealing is an offence and she had to face the consequences of her actions. At first, Rebecca laughed and scoffed at the mysterious person. “What trouble could I get into?” she retorted scornfully. The mysterious person spoke in a stern tone. “If you were caught stealing, you will be sent to jail and you have to return whatever items you have stolen to the victim. Everybody will know you are a thief. You have to carry this bad reputation for the rest of your life. Nobody will trust you.” Rebecca had heard enough “Stop talking! Please go away.” The mysterious person vanished. She could still hear his voice echoing in her ear.
Rebecca woke up immediately in cold sweat. She looked around for the mysterious person but there was nobody. The dream seemed real. She could hear herself breathing hard. She calmed herself. Rebecca realized that it was early in the morning. She got up and washed herself. She tried to shake off the nightmare by occupying herself with some tasks. Throughout the day, the words of the mysterious person kept lingering in her mind. She felt guilty and decided to return the valuables to Steve.
After lunch, Rebecca went to Steve’s garage. Steve was surprised to see Rebecca. Rebecca felt nervous. She told Steve everything. Rebecca showed Steve the stolen valuables and money. Steve was shocked and livid. Rebecca asked for forgiveness from Steve. Steve looked at her sternly and reprimanded her. He warned her not to steal again. Rebecca promised him not to commit the mistake again. Steve’s gaze softened. He would not report Rebecca to the police. Rebecca heaved a sigh of relief. She was grateful to Steve for not reporting her and thanked him profusely. Rebecca also secretly thanked the mysterious person for rescuing her.

This is total original.

Oh I know... its... *winks at Flameleaf and Goldenfur* haha we all know....

Yup I know *wink back at Iceclaw and winks at Goldenfur* Good work! *though I read i before ^^*

Haha yup. It's that one. *winks back at Iceclaw and Flameleaf* ^^

Flameleaf of FireClan wrote:

Yup I know *wink back at Iceclaw and winks at Goldenfur* Good work! *though I read i before ^^*

Yea I know. I too lazy to write my own.

Goldenfur wrote:

Flameleaf of FireClan wrote:

Yup I know *wink back at Iceclaw and winks at Goldenfur* Good work! *though I read i before ^^*

Yea I know. I too lazy to write my own.

You mean too lazy and no time? I also no time because of exams ><.

Flameleaf of FireClan wrote:

Goldenfur wrote:

Flameleaf of FireClan wrote:

Yup I know *wink back at Iceclaw and winks at Goldenfur* Good work! *though I read i before ^^*

Yea I know. I too lazy to write my own.

You mean too lazy and no time? I also no time because of exams ><.

Yea that's what I mean.

Awesome story! It proves and shows a valuable lesson and encourages others not to commit crimes. It may be original but I like it! At least you didn't just point out the problem and solved it, instead you added many details and made things so much more interesting! Awesome job!

Thanks Fireheart!

It's a good story with a good moral

Yeah haha it was actually for homework XD haha but I like the story too!

Thanks FabFur and Iceclaw!

~Yup it's for homework. ~

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