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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:31 am | |
| P R O L O G U E It was drizzling. Lithe dark shapes crouched warily in their dens, fear shown clearly in their eyes as the lightning cackled above. A hunting patrol had returned- three drenched cats padded swiftly into the camp. A long-haired tom leaped from the Jaggedstone and landed in front of them silently. He growled at them menacingly, “Clawface, why has your hunting patrol come back without any prey?” The gray tom shifted uncomfortably on his paws. “We could not find any prey, Brokentail.” Instantly, there was a sharp jolt of pain and Clawface winced from the fresh new claw mark on his face. Brokentail’s eyes were cold and hard, his claws glistening in the moonlight. The other two cats recoiled slightly. Brokentail gazed at them unflinchingly. “I expect more from you next time.” With that, he turned around and disappeared into the shadows. “The recent fire has wiped out all the prey. What does Brokentail expect us to do? Start breeding them?” A brown and white tom muttered, scraping at the ground furiously. A black tom emerged from the medicine cat’s den. “StarClan will be by our side, Falconwing,” he mewed calmly, “Our ancestors will help us when we need them most.” “Blackhawk, if I believe in StarClan, I would have believed in anything!” Falconwing spat back, his tail lashing in rage. “I don’t see any glittering cats here.” His voice was dripping with sarcasm. Blackhawk was wise enough to not reply. He lifted his head and gazed at the starry sky. “My apprentice is d… dying!” His voice was thick with emotion and grief. For a moment he did not speak but merely glanced at the limp brown body lying unmoving in the medicine cat’s den. He continued angrily, “And StarClan’s doing nothing to help him!” Just then, a shooting star shot across the sky, sparks trailing behind it. The fur along Blackhawk’s spine bristled. After what seemed like eternity, the black medicine cat turned towards Falconwing. “StarClan sent me a sign,” he mewed, a distant look in his golden eyes. “DarkClan will survive. But not through a period of darkness first.” Falconwing felt a slight flare of hope burning. “Will Cougarpaw survive?” His eyes shone brightly. “Not through a period of darkness first.” Blackhawk echoed.
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Rubywing Legend
Gender : Posts : 2958 Prey Points : 5438
Character Sheet Clan: ThunderClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:43 am | |
| nice I like it Keep going | |
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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:57 am | |
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Goldenfur Legend
Gender : Posts : 3078 Prey Points : 3718
Character Sheet Clan: SkyClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:49 am | |
| Cool! Nice writing on the prolougue! | |
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Flameleaf of FireClan StarClan Cat
Gender : Posts : 1537 Prey Points : 1903
Character Sheet Clan: ThunderClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:50 am | |
| You uploaded it? Cool! Keep going with Chapter 3! *mischeavious grin* (I know i spelled it wrongly but I don't know how to spell it... -.-ll) | |
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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 2:28 am | |
| Thanks Goldenfur and Flameleaf! I'm going to post Chapter 3 soon! | |
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Goldenfur Legend
Gender : Posts : 3078 Prey Points : 3718
Character Sheet Clan: SkyClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:46 am | |
| Great! (SHould I post? o.O) | |
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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:40 am | |
| Yes you should! | |
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Flameleaf of FireClan StarClan Cat
Gender : Posts : 1537 Prey Points : 1903
Character Sheet Clan: ThunderClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:26 pm | |
| I will but I am waiting for Fireheart or Seedstar to accept my PM to buy the fanfic category first. | |
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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:39 pm | |
| Oh okay! I was lucky because Mosspelt was on the chatbox! | |
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Stonestep StarClan Cat
Gender : Posts : 2009 Prey Points : 3054
Character Sheet Clan: ThunderClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:55 pm | |
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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Sat Sep 24, 2011 1:44 am | |
| Thank you Stonstep! | |
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Stonestep StarClan Cat
Gender : Posts : 2009 Prey Points : 3054
Character Sheet Clan: ThunderClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:52 pm | |
| No problem! It was very good! | |
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Iceclaw Legend
Gender : Posts : 3460 Prey Points : 3875
Character Sheet Clan: RiverClan
| Subject: Re: PROLOGUE Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:58 am | |
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