Chasing Shadows Chapters 1-10 Reveiw.

~Will be doing this every 10 chapters~

Thanks to anyone who's actually bothered to read the first ten chapters, I really appreiciate it!

This is really just a topic to say what you think of the story so far, which characters and chapters you like the best and what I can do to improve. I know my writing style probably isn't the best but hopefully that will improve over time. As for what's coming next, I could tell you, but then 'd have to banish you from the cookie jar x]

And as a little something, I'm in need of character names~ I need two names, one for a tom and one for a she-kit. If you have any suggestions, comment below!

Hmm... Shinykit for the she-kit and Silverkit for the tom!

Suggestions:

Blizzardkit
Winterkit
Frozenkit
Coldkit
Autumnkit
Amberkit
Fallowkit
Lynxkit

(they are all from my book! XD)

I'll think about the names as I'm writing~ And I'll see what everyone else comes up with too~

Shinekit
Creamkit
Glimmerkit
Sparklekit
Noisykit
Puddlekit
Summerkit
Lakekit
Beechkit
Viperkit
Strawkit
Tricklekit
Crystalkit
Sunnykit
~These are from my book also, but not just kits~

Brightkit
Snowkit
Blizzardkit
Milkkit
Frostkit
Volekit
Crystalkit
These are some suggestions for names of kits.

Thanks, I'll probably end up using 2 or 3~

YAY Thats GREAT! I see Lynxkit in your book! ^^